User:Likesrocks/The Fable of Fox and Heron/Exoticfreccs Peer Review

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I think your writing so far is amazing and really well written. I think a few changes you should make in your introduction are not to talk so much about the detail of the art and leave that for another paragraph where you can give more of the formal analysis of the artifact. Talk more about the interpretation of the painting for the introduction. That is just my opinion but you don't have to change it. Keep up the great work and I can't wait to see the final product.