User:Likesrocks/The Fable of Fox and Heron/Orbsofperception Peer Review

General info
Likesrocks
 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Likesrocks/The_Fable_of_Fox_and_Heron?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Likesrocks/The_Fable_of_Fox_and_Heron?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * Very well written!
 * I like the small subsections you've split it into for easier navigability
 * The tone feels a bit biased, for example, when you write "contributes to the harmonious atmosphere" in the last line of the Lead, it feels like you could be imposing a feeling or atmosphere onto the reader
 * In the section about the artist, I'm not quite sure what you mean when you write "Friend of Reubens and Van Dyke was a frequent collaborator whose work was very influential on Dutch Realists and later Baroque artists."
 * A very in depth article! I'm not sure if full descriptions of the fables are necessary, maybe when you mention it, you could provide a citation to another wikipedia article covering it, then continue talking about the work
 * Really good work! Keep it up!