User:Likesrocks/The Fable of Fox and Heron/PersianaAmericana23 Peer Review

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Likesrocks
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Likesrocks/The_Fable_of_Fox_and_Heron?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
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Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead is well constructed and gives the reader a clear idea of the most upfront information related to the painting. The description of the scene is also well thought out. In the section of the artist himself, there is a brief background of Snyders' training and colleagues. The technique section appears to be generalized to the basics of oil-on-canvas painting and it would be more useful to dedicate this section to the specifics of Snyders' facture and any unique material characteristics of this painting, especially those that we can gain the most from in-person observation. The addition of the preparatory drawing is a nice touch and I wonder if there is anything to be gained from the drawing itself. I am not sure the sections which explain the narratives themselves are necessary. Perhaps there is a link that can send the reader to these individual stories. Discussing the sources used, there is a mix of academic peer-review journal articles and websites about museum exhibitions relevant to the topic. If there were some sources that could be missing from this article, if they exist in English, then any monographs on Snyders or books related to this type of Flemish painting may bring helpful additions to the article. Lastly, I would recommend keeping with Frans Snyders proper surname, that it is "Snyders" and not "Snyder".