User:Likethefig/Vibrator (sex toy)/Marthagonzo Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Likethefig)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Vibrator (sex toy)


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Vibrator (sex toy)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The edits that Likethefig added to the article added more value to the article itself. I think it was important to highlight vibrators when it comes to queer relationships as well as vibrators among disabled individuals. I think her edits were really concise and was very well written. I think Likethefig adds important information on bringing awareness to diminish the taboo of vibrators especially among queer relationships. However, I do think there should be information written over the section of vibrators for disabled people, it should be a topic that has more awareness. The sources used were great, they were very well used and provided great information. Overall, I think the content added is very relevant to the topic as it allows more exposure for use of vibrators among various relationships. Great edits Likethefig!