User:LilIlyich/General Union of Palestinian Women/Flying dill Peer Review

General info
Goldenflowergarden, KevinSantosKS, Vmrtz, LilIlyich
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:General Union of Palestinian Women
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
This is a really good start! I would like to know more about what movements they have contributed to or what kind of message they are presenting. Your topic seems very intriguing. I feel your page is a little unfinished and could use more sources while you add more information. Organization and media look good. I am excited to see the complete page!