User:LilMuffin7/Juvenile delinquency/Eternitygxrl Peer Review

It took me a little bit to find where your contributions were but I did finally find it and I’m glad I did! So far, it seems like a wonderful start to a contribution for your article. Writing about the origins or the history of a term is incredibly important when covering all aspects of a certain topic, so I believe this contribution is a great improvement to the article. Furthermore, it seems you have two strong sources of information that are cited really well, which makes it hard to find any criticisms to review. I think the only thing I could say as an idea is just to go more in depth with what might have changed in order for people to start seeing that juveniles should not be tried like adults, instead of just stating that before the 18th century they were tried as adults, and then after they weren’t. But again, this is not a real criticism as you’ve only just started your contribution, and its a great start at that! Overall, very good job so far, keep it up!

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LilMuffin7
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:LilMuffin7/Juvenile_delinquency/Bibliography
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Juvenile_delinquency

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