User:LilaNewberry/Inclusion (education)/Emro12 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

LilaNewberry


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Inclusion (education)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
It does not appear that any new content has been added. The introduction is concise and illustrates the outline of what will be covered. The content is up-to-date and relevant to the topic as well as, for the most part, neutral. There is a section on the differing views, which is an example of where the content demonstrates a variety of biases. The sources are current and the links work. There are two images with adequate captions to help add a visual appearance to this rather long article. Overall, there is an ample amount of content on this topic and could use some grammatical revision.