User:Lilagoldman/Ailurophobia/Sdiestler Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Lilagoldman


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Lilagoldman/Ailurophobia?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Ailurophobia

Evaluate the drafted changes
Great addition to the lead paragraph. Add citation for phonetic spelling. Description was same as current version of article, I did not notice what edits were changed. Sources used for causes were reliable and credible. Anything edited in sandbox had a neutral tone. Maybe the editor can add an image to help readers understand the concept better! Content was easy to read overall. Great catch on the plagiarism for the treatment section. Brainstorm in sandbox how you can write treatment in your own words. Certain edits were already added to current article, great work! ~ sdiestler