User:Liliana.Guti/Land Apportionment Act of 1930/Taram21 Peer Review

Great work Liliana! This article was interesting to read and well-written.

The lead reflects the organization of the article. You also go over the organization of the article, and don't include information that isn't in the rest of the article. I would perhaps explain in the second sentence who the colonial power was that passed the law. I would be more specific in the last sentence when you mention how the "current administration works to redefine land ownership in the twenty-first century."

Your content is relevant and up-to-date with the topic at hand. I liked how you linked the topic to land reform in Zimbabwe today. I think at the end of the "Legacy and consequences" page you could go into more depth about the nature of land reform in Zimbabwe today, since its such a contentious issue.

Your content is neutral and the article is written without bias. The only comment I would have for this section is to explain/elaborate on causes of inequality due to the 1930 act — financial effects of segregation? Statistics that reflect the population crisis/ecological damage? Testimonies from native peoples that were affected by this and following legislation?

All content is properly cited and is backed up by reliable sources that are fairly exhaustive. All citations are scholarly resources, with the exception of Encyclopedia Britannica which is used for basic information. The sources are current and the links work. Perhaps you could incorporate another source for the "Land rights before 1930" section besides the first source if there is a reliable source that would work.

The content is well-written and well-organized in chronological order. One grammatical error to point out:

- "corruption lead" -> "corruption led"

Your images are helpful and well-captioned. You could add a couple more towards the end of the article since the first two come early in the article.

Your article meets the notability standards (as Yesenia pointed out, the article on land reform in Zimbabwe is also pertinent for your subject). This article is super important for Zimbabwean history as you outline well.

Overall, I really liked your article. Nice work!