User:Liliana.Guti/Land Apportionment Act of 1930/Yesenia23pinon Peer Review

Yesenia Pinon's Peer review
I will be reviewing Liliana.Guti article on the 1930 Land Apportionment Act, which can be found here: User:Liliana.Guti/sandbox

Overall, you're lead Lead reflects the content you have added. However, you should maybe try to incorporate a little more information to your Lead on the land rights prior to 1930. Your Lead also includes an introductory sentence that clearly describes your article's topic. Your Lead does include a brief description of the article's major sections, however, as mentioned earlier, you should add brief information on the land rights prior to 1930. Your Lead doesn't not include information that is not present in the article, which is good, since the Lead is only supposed to have the information you are presenting. I think you did a great job in the Lead section because it is not overly detailed, its simply a clear road map of your article.

For content, everything you added is relevant. I'm not sure if you are drafting a new article or if you are helping improve one. But I actually found a Wikipedia page you could link your article with. The Wikipedia page is '''Land reform in Zimbabwe. (Link:''' Land reform in Zimbabwe )

Additionally, you do have some information on the consequences of the 1930 act, however, you do not have much information on the 1980 Lancaster House Agreement which basically seeks to distribute land equally between black subsistence farmers and whites. I know your article is not on the 1980 Agreement, however, a good ending on it which then links to its page would be good for readers. On the other hand, the content you have added seems neutral and is not biased. You provide straight facts and information that informs the reader, without leading them to have a particular position. I clicked on all of your sources link and they seem to be working perfectly fine. They all seem to be reliable academic source.Your content is well-written and clear to read. I did find some grammatical error and some extra words in your section on Land Rights before 1930. Your article is supported by enough sources! Good Job!

Your content will improve the knowledge on the 1930 Land Apportionment Act of Wikipedia since the Land Reform in Zimbabwe article does not provide enough information on the 1930 Act.