User:Liliana.mendezz/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Talk:FedEx Express

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I originally chose this article because I've often wondered how packages are delivered from country to country/state to state so quickly. Recently, I have flown on planes and have realized that cargo planes such as FedEx are massive and must take a while to load and unload. So overall, I was interested in the topic and that is why I chose it!

Evaluate the article
Everything within the article is relevant to the topic. The article provides a little bit of background that does well with not going too far off topic, there are also great statistics and historical facts that are good to know. Although appreciated, there may be too many historical facts. I do think this could be improved upon, that way the information does not seem outdated and irrelevant. The article is surprisingly neutral, the facts and information are presented with very little (if any) bias. When talking about the incidents that have occurred throughout the history of FedEx, there is no slander language used and provides clear facts. I do think that the article is lacking a fresher perspective, it talks about the past and gives no data about the current climate that FedEx is in! After checking some of the sources, they have all proven to be working and relevant to the article. Along with relevance, the information in the sources ties directly back to the information provided in the original article. The last response on the "Talk" page is from 2017, needless to say this article is not updated with current information as thought. It could definitely use some updates on the information or a reevaluation of what is necessary to be in it! The article is rated pretty low, it is considered a level 5 article vital article. With improvements it can be used as a good source for people looking to learn more about FedEx Express.