User:Liliana Horst/Social media and suicide/Meardsley Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Liliana Horst


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Liliana%20Horst/Social_media_and_suicide?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Social media and suicide

Evaluate the drafted changes
Try to find more information on the intervention section and include more platforms.

"Gerald Krein and William Francis Melchert-Dinkel were accused of arranging internet suicide pacts." This sentence under the suicide pact section feels out of place and isn't followed up with anymore information.

There are some sections where certain claims can go into more detail to explain why it is relevant to the article rather than just citing source.