User:Liliananrodriguez/Economy of Lesotho/SachiyoOuchi Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? (provide username)  Kristinatseng
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:Liliananrodriguez/sandbox

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer? No.
 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic? Yes.
 * Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections? Yes.
 * Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article? No.
 * Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed? It is concise.

Content
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added relevant to the topic? Yes.
 * Is the content added up-to-date? Some data is old.
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong? Maybe you can also talk about inequality rate (gini coefficient) as a part of the section.

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added neutral? Yes.
 * Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position? No.
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented? No.
 * Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another? No.

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information? Yes.
 * Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic? There is one empty source.
 * Are the sources current? - The adult literacy information is old.
 * Check a few links. Do they work? - One empty source.

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read? - Yes.
 * Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors? - No.
 * Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic? - Yes.

Images and Media
Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media


 * Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic? - No.

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete? Yes.
 * What are the strengths of the content added? - Updated information.
 * How can the content added be improved? - Perhaps you can expand on other sections of the article as well.

Overall evaluation
It would be nice to see where you plan to edit further in this article.