User:Lilisibou/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
(https://fr.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ray_Eames)

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
There's almost no content about her life on this page, which is more precise on her relatives and marriage.

Evaluate the article
The article is very precise about the early life of Ray Eames, but tells almost nothing about the rest of her life. There's not much information about her work ans her career.

The lead section contents an information that isn't mentionned in the article, which is the fact that she was a director.

The first paragraph of the content section needs to be remodeled to start with her birth and then the occupation of her father, since he's not the subject of the article.