User:Lilladlili/Temperate deciduous forest/Digi227Bravo Peer Review

General info
Lilladlili
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Lilladlili/Temperate deciduous forest
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Temperate deciduous forest

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * 1) I can see you have been busy here. The original article is very short, and you've done well to fill it in  with relevant information.
 * 2) Lead section is great. Clear, and gives a good sense of what the article is about. First sentence is clear.
 * 3) Geography section-- there are some phrases that repeat "below the northern boreal forests.."
 * 4) Geography section-- "One third of all land is covered by forests." I'm not sure you need this sentence, or if you leave it in, at least follow with fact about how this relates to Temperate deciduous forests. Also, your reference does not come from a peer reviewed article. This is not ideal.
 * 5) Climate-- "Temperate conditions refer to the cycle through four...." again this first sentence seems out of place in this article, even though you follow with how it relates to temperate deciduous forests. Consider rearranging this information so it does not sound like you're teaching us the meaning of temperate conditions.
 * 6) Your Seasonal Variation subsection is quite good. Very well written and informative.
 * 7) Characteristic section--  could maybe get scaled back a little. It's tough, because all your information is interesting and relevant. But not everyone visiting this page will be an ecologist. Maybe just look for ways to make it tighter, and easier to digest. There is some information in the Soil subsection that gets repeated in the next paragraph-- "As deciduous trees lose their leaves..", "broadleaf trees that lose their leaves in the fall." Maybe start there.
 * 8) Well cited for the most part.
 * 9) I'm very impressed by all the work you've done. I look forward to reading the finished article.