User:Lilladlili/Temperate deciduous forest/Ty.olkkola Peer Review

General info
Lilladlili
 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Temperate deciduous forest
 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Lilladlili/Temperate deciduous forest
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Lead
You have a really good lead so far! I like that you included some relevant stats and general information about this topic without going too far in-depth. It's definitely more concise than the lead in the existing article.

Content
Your added content is very strong. This article was clearly lacking in information and everything that you've added for Climate and Characteristics will definitely improve this article.

Tone and Balance
Your tone is neutral and doesn't show any bias. You also keep the information balanced within subtopics so nothing is being discussed too much or too little.

Sources and References
You've done a nice job of interspersing references throughout the material you added, and all your sources look relevant and credible.

Organization
In terms of organization, you've done a really nice job of breaking up topics with subheadings to keep the flow of the article moving. Everything is placed in a logical order and nothing seems out of place.

Images and Media
I'm not sure if you plan to add any media to the original article, but even if you don't, I would maybe suggest moving the existing images out of the gallery tab and incorporating them into the article after you post your edits.

Overall Impressions
This is some super impressive stuff! These are the best edits I've seen out of all the articles I reviewed today so keep up the good work! I don't have many suggestions for improvements besides just double-checking grammar for punctuation and capitalization but other than that, you've got some awesome stuff!