User:LilliBaldner/Microaggression/CKRRKQ Peer Review


 * Whose work are you reviewing?

LilliBaldner


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:LilliBaldner/Microaggression?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead
The lead of this article is short, but it has a good start. It states that it focuses on micro-aggressions on sexuality from an intersectional point of view.

Content
The content added to this article is also short, but it is relevant to the topic. It discusses the seven types of micro-aggressions that can occur. However, the body is lacking lots of information.

Tone and Balance
So far, the content added seems to be neutral in tone and does not read with a bias. Everything is very informational.

Sources and References
There is only one source on the page, but it seems to be reliable/legitimate.

Organization
The page is well organized so far, even though it needs a lot more content. The structure of the page is off to a good start, though.

Images and Media
N/A, the article draft does not have any images or media.

Overall Impressions
Again, it needs a lot more content, but it is off to a good start. The tone is neutral, the source is reliable, and the structure of the page is solid.