User:LilliBaldner/Microaggression/Oskeans Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

LilliBaldner


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:LilliBaldner/Microaggression


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Microaggression

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * "Derald Wing Sue" --does this person have a Wiki page you could hyperlink their name to?
 * "...that there tends to be about certain..." is this a typo?
 * I think the first sentence of the article body could be rewritten in a more concise way.
 * Is there a way you can link your citation within the article using the cite tool? I think this would be helpful for readers.
 * Awesome work! I think this is a really interesting topic and can be useful to many people. I'm interested to see the final changes!