User:Lillyantt17/Noeline Alcorn/Jramos1299 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Lillyantt17


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Noeline Alcorn
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
- Try to incorporate some of her studies and what they found

- You could write include how she has created an impact and why she is significant

- I like the overall organization of the article!

- Write more about how she came up to be a significant figure

- You can try to include images of her to make the page more intriguing

- Your list of sources look good!