User:Lilsunchip/Monoarthritis/Kathrine.saxton Peer Review

General info
Lilsunchip
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Lilsunchip/Monoarthritis?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
I really like the causes section! I feel like it has been organized well and is easy to read. It is almost too good as your other sections are much shorter in length. I think the first sentence can be made into a couple and then use a header. I use the word "Overview" for my first section. Maybe turn it into some thing like "Monoarthritus, or monoarticular arthritis, is specialized subtype of arthritis. It is typically associated with arthritis like symptoms only in one joint." Something like this to expand that part. I think that should be a good introduction to your topic as long as you make it a decent paragraph.

As far as sources go I think a better variety of sources would be good. I may have over done my sources but instead of using the same four find others that expand upon what you already have. For example your first source is great! If you look, you'll find there are a bunch of different sources that your first one used that you can look into. Your current sources are great choices!

Your diagnosis part can 100% be expanded just using that first source.

I think its really good so far! Just a little more detail and some source variety would be great!