User:Lilurkel44/We Real Cool: Black Men and Masculinity/Aysiagrey Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Lilurkel44


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Lilurkel44/We_Real_Cool%3A_Black_Men_and_Masculinity?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * We Real Cool: Black Men and Masculinity

Evaluate the drafted changes
The article does a great job of summarizing the book and giving context to what happens throughout the story. The article could use some context on bell hooks. I think its good that her name is hyper linked but maybe some added information on the author in context to the story cold be beneficial for those who mighty have never heard of her. Something that could be improved is maybe a book reference section or key words section.