User:Lilurkel44/We Real Cool: Black Men and Masculinity/CardamomEnthusiast Peer Review

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Lilurkel44


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We Real Cool: Black Men and Masculinity

Evaluate the drafted changes
The original article is essentially a chapter-by-chapter breakdown to the point of resembling a cliffs notes of the book. There are excessive quotations, the sources are limited almost exclusively to the book the article is about (plus one book review) and there are many citations/sources missing. There is a lot to be expanded upon- the background of the novel, the themes, the cultural influence, etc. I'm adding a link to an article about a book which was done in a well-rounded way:

I Know Why the Caged Bird Sings