User:Lilurkel44/We Real Cool: Black Men and Masculinity/Tge3hn Peer Review

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The Leads of this page need to be expanded upon. The organization for what is there is okay. The punctuation and spelling is not good. The main part of this article looks to be a book review going through each poem. What about each poem being a subsection and with a few more references. Also talking more about Bell Hooks would be good. Images would be super helpful of her and of the book's covers. The tone and balance I think would improve with overall organization improvement.