User:Lily's pads/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
"Schools for the deaf" - LINK: Schools for the deaf

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I visited to Paris 3 years ago, I met the Deaf French Tourist who graduated from the Institut National de Jeunes Sourds de Paris and she shared with whole facts and story that why I chose this article. It felt like I'm a journal for this from facts without makeup. Because It's important to check the schools for the deaf for accurate facts, history, and the location of the first deaf school. Many people believe that the America School for the Deaf in Connecticut is the world's first and second Gallaudet University, however this is not the case. By the 17th century, the Institut National de Jeunes Sourds de Paris had become the world's first Deaf school.

Evaluate the article
In "Schools for the deaf," the year 1771 is inaccurate. I discovered that the right year was 1760, not 1771, as stated in the documentation.

"The school began in 1760 and shortly thereafter was opened to the public and became the world's first free school for the deaf. It was originally located in a house at 14 rue des Moulins, butte Saint-Roch, near the Louvre in Paris." - Institut National de Jeunes Sourds de Paris

Furthermore, "In the fourth phrase, "home-signs" should be included, citing https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Home sign Because not everyone understands what "Home Sign" signifies and why it is used.

Also, "the header said School for the  deaf, " which should be amended to "Deaf," which is frequently capitalized and referred to as "big D Deaf." "in both speech and sign language ( https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Deafness )