User:Lily.sophia.kate/Campamento (Chile)/Laveah Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Layli Sophia Kate


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Lily.sophia.kate/Campamento (Chile)


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)


 * Lead
 * The lead was clear and stated what the article is about. I'd suggest that the environmental justice aspect is also mentioned in the lead since it is a keen component of the article.
 * Content
 * The added content is relevant to the article and up to date.
 * Tone and Balance
 * The article maintains an unbiased tone. Adding info about the Chilean government actions, if any towards improving health issues in the shantytowns might be relevant.
 * Resources and References
 * All references look up to date and from reliable sources
 * Organization
 * The organization looks great.
 * Images and Media
 * There are no images.
 * Overall Impression
 * I think this article follows wikipedia's guidelines, again, I'd just emphasize on improving the lead to let readers know what themes are being covered.