User:Lilybillow/Mandala/Josephrkopta Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:Lilybillow


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Lilybillow/Mandala


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Mandala

Lead
You might update the lead to refer to the fact that mandalas are both conceptual and artistic/architectural, i.e. taking multiple forms. I don't think you necessarily need to mention your new section in the lead.

Content
Your new section looks good. Did you also want to update the architecture subsection? I think we mentioned during our research appointment the Great Stupa of Sanchi and Borobudur.

You should post on the talk page of Mandala a short introduction to who you are and what your proposed modification is. You'll probably get feedback within a day or two! (Check out Jillian's comments on the Talk:Shinto shrine, and the response she got.)

Remember to link words or phrases to existing Wikipedia articles!

Organization
At the moment, I'm not sure if the way the entire article is optimally organized. This is probably not something that you should go in and completely reorganize, but you might want to ask or suggest how the article overall might better be organized on the Talk page. Also, it seems as if mandala is being defined and applied in multiple different ways (i.e., is this the proper page to put Mesoamerican calendars?)

Images
Down the line, you might incorporate an image or two: 1. of a sand mandala; 2. of architecture; 3. a diagram of what the elements in a mandala represent. The inserting images and media training module will help you with this.