User:Lin.jaide/Affordable housing by country/Daniellesori Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:Lin.jaide


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Lin.jaide/Affordable_housing_by_country?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Affordable housing by country

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi Jaide, here's my peer review:

Lead


 * Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer? - A lead hasn't been updated to reflect the sections, but your contributions seem pretty straight forward!

Content


 * Is the content added relevant to the topic? - Your additions have new citations to the existing information on the article. Unsure if the United States section is being drafted still, but Indonesia is expanded through your draftbox.
 * Is the content added up-to-date? - Yes, articles seem to be retrieved up-to-date.

Tone and Balance


 * Is the content added neutral? - Yes
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented? - For the sentences that are direct quotes, might need to expand more.

Source and References


 * Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information? - Maybe a citation for "The Indonesian Ministry of Housing announced its commitment to increasing the accessibility of long-term housing and refining the housing finance system, as well as incorporating more local government and stakeholder involvement in housing and settlement development."

Organization


 * Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read? - Yes
 * Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors? - Needs a space between "Subsidi" and ",or" in the first sentence.

Overall Impressions


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete? - Yes!

-Danielle