User:Lin.jaide/Affordable housing by country/Emmazeko Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Lin.jaide


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Lin.jaide/Affordable_housing_by_country?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Affordable housing by country

Evaluate the drafted changes
Mali: -"The economic cost of the building decreases, and as a result over 1,000 woodless buildings had been built.": this sentence feels a little awkward, I think something small like the addition of the word also could make it read better

-"of a woodless", I think take out "a", this is from the first paragraph

-India: "18 million units(add comma) most", maybe say what PPP model is

Indonesia: "Affordable housing in Indonesia called Rumah Subsidi,or for apartement version called Rusunawa", this sentence could be reworked

Other than these mostly grammatical fixes, your writing comes across as neutral and well sourced, other than the one spot you put you still need a citation.