User:Lin2525/South Puget Sound Community College/Haolongzzz Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Lin2525


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Lin2525/South Puget Sound Community College
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * South Puget Sound Community College

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi my friend,

Overall solid improvements in your article, and I firmly believe all the sources are relevant to the article. In addition, all the citation links could work perfectly and you do have a neutral tone in your article.

I agree with what Kaylea said on your talk page, if you could take some photos of the school and then post them in your article, it would be much better for rating! Also, I think you should probably elaborate more on your last three sections to keep the entire article more balanced. For instance, you could find some previous or current articles published by the Student Media on the school website. What is more, if you could mention some notable people from this college, that would add more credibility to your article as well.

I found a well-written wiki page to show you as an example, Pasadena City College. This is also a famous community college, so it should be helpful for you to improve your article to the next level.

Wish my suggestions could help.

Haolong Zhang