User:Lindsaymr/Grebo people/Dreaotic Neutral Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

lindsaymr


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Lindsaymr/Grebo_people?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Grebo people

Lead
The lead doesn’t appear to have been updated

Content
The content added is relevant and up to date. Many of the sources are from the 1990s and later. However, there is quite a bit of content that is missing from this article. Information on things like their culture, their artistic practices, their leadership, and their history, though that one is noted already. The content added to the article is neutral in tone, though there is a section (Attitudes) that appears to be written from a biased viewpoint that should be either edited or removed and replaced.

Tone and Balance
The content added to the article is neutral in tone, though there is a section (Attitudes) that appears to be written from a biased viewpoint that should be either edited or removed and replaced.

Sources and References
The new content is backed up by verified and reputable sources. There are sections that were already in the article that may need new or updated sources. Many of the listed sources, both newly added and already present, seem to be from no earlier than the 1990s. However, almost all of the sources are written by the same person so maybe you could find some sources from other people, just to get an insight on other viewpoints. Also, the links for references 1, 2, 6, 11, and 12 lead to a defunct site and the 9th source leads to another Wikipedia article

Organization
The added information is, to my comprehension, concise and easy to read with no spelling or grammar errors that I could find. The new content is also organized well, with the information going in its proper section

Overall impressions
While I wouldn’t say the article is complete, it's definitely on its way there with the new information adding context to the Grebo peoples’ ritual culture. And while there isn't enough new content to suggest how it could be improved, all that really needs to happen is to keep adding more content, as the content added already is great. It’s clear, neutral, and cited well. Maybe you can try to comb through some of the information that’s already there and expand upon it as well and possibly see if you can find any other sources from other people.