User:Lindsaynandm13/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Green growth - Wikipedia

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose to evaluate this article because the title was interesting to me. Green growth matters because in order for the economy be sustained for future generations, we must think about ways to become more environmentally friendly. My preliminary impression of this page was pretty much exactly what I thought it was going to be about.

Evaluate the article
Overall, the article was insightful. However, the as a reader, I wish there was more information about the topic. There are minor spelling mistakes and run-on sentences. Most of the lead section paragraphs are not backed up by evidence. The lead section does not have a brief description of the articles major sections. The tone of the article is neutral. I think there are viewpoints that are underrepresented. This article could use some editing to refine the topics and to add to the quality of the article.