User:Lindseyfturner106/Childhood schizophrenia/DET313205 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:Lindseyfturner106


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Lindseyfturner106/Childhood_schizophrenia?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Childhood schizophrenia

Evaluate the drafted changes
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Your edits include important information that are a useful addition to the article. I am not entirely sure how much you have added to this article. Given that it appears as if there is a significant amount of the material within your sandbox which is not at all seen in the original article, I have to conclude that you've just added quite a lot to the article. If that is so, good job. You've added whole sections about imaging and genetic risk. All I would suggest is that you use more concise section titles, like the majority of the article. For example, instead of "Highest Risk Among Relatives", I would add this information to "Genetic" and add a subsection/subtitle for risk amongst relatives.