User:Lindseyfturner106/Childhood schizophrenia/Gsims99 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Lindseyfturner106


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Lindseyfturner106/Childhood_schizophrenia?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Childhood schizophrenia

Evaluate the drafted changes
I really like the additions you have added so far, especially the "Highest risk among relatives" section. If there is anymore research you can find on that section, I think expanding that could be a good path to take. Also something to keep in mind is that the information in this section could potentially be added under the "Genetic" section and may even make more sense that way instead of making a new subsection.

Also, in the start of the article you use "COS", which I assume is an abbreviation for childhood-onset schizophrenia. I think outright using the full phrase instead of the abbreviation would be better here for the reader because the average person may not know that is the abbreviation.

Expanding the imaging section could be useful is well because it is very short compared to some of the other sections of the article. If anymore research could be found on this topic, I think it would be good to include the information to this section.