User:Lindseyfturner106/Childhood schizophrenia/JessDeckk Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Lindseyfturner106


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Lindseyfturner106/Childhood schizophrenia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Childhood schizophrenia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Childhood schizophrenia

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think you are on the right track already. Your add ons and edits are informative and seem to be in the appropriate place. My advice for future editing would be: Maybe include some studies on treatments to show the accuracy or non accuracy of it. Maybe add in medications if any? Adults can probably endure more treatment options at once so it would be cool to touch on how kids and adults are treated differently with it.