User:Lindseywilmot16/Social media use in politics/Carterlockwood1 Peer Review

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Lindseywilmot16
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I think you did a very good job of making sure to acknowledge the importance of politicians use of social media for communication with the public and constituents, you also provide specific examples such as prudent trumps twitter usage which helps to add depth to the discussion

to improve this I think you could help add or expand on the various purposes politicians use social media for, such as fundraising, mobilizing supporters, and shaping public perception. They could also provide a broader range of example beyond trumps presidency for a larger understanding

I think you could also add context and analysis which could involve discussing the broader impact of general rhetoric of political discourse and norms, moving beyond a description and into a more critical analysis.

You use of specific examples and reputable sources such as the NPR article cited helps to add credibility, and following a similar approach by providing context and analysis could help strengthen the article