User:Lindsing17/Xenia (Greek)/Lemurcat111 Peer Review

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(Lindsing17)
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Lindsing17/Xenia (Greek)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Xenia (Greek)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead section

Honestly I don't have much to say here because I think it looks good and I like the way you have it formatted over the original but I do think the word choice of calling it bad Xenia for when the guest rites are ill performed is a little jarring when I read it in my head it works perfectly fine but I think maybe failed Xenia flows better.

clarity of article structure

I think that you have cleaned up and made the body section far more efficient than the public article And i like your notes for your future plans with the body paragraphs too.

content neutrality

I think the use of the phrase eating them out of house and home while neutral could be simplified for people who may not know the phrases meaning.

Sources

I like your plan you outlined for the sources section I think finding some more may do a lot for the article But I agree with you that the article already cites the literature it uses well.