User:Lindsmach/Genographic Project/Ninaflinn Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) Lindsmach


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Lindsmach/Genographic_Project?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Genographic Project

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I think you made really good changes to the criticism section. It clarifies a lot, as the original article did not really explain why i indigenous people were not recommended to participate. I also think that this was a good section to chose because it could be enhanced.

This is a really small change but "Additionally" is spelled wrong in the middle of the second paragraph. Overall, I think this change is really good and clarifies a lot in the original article. It is written neutrally, and the sources are good. I don't know if you were planning on also keeping the last paragraphs in the original article (since they aren't in your sandbox), but I think that those are good and maybe should be included in the new article.