User:Linktg/Hypoplectrus gummigutta/Cheny2 Peer Review

General info[edit]

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ccbeigh, Linktg


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Linktg/Hypoplectrus gummigutta ßßß


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Hypoplectrus gummigutta

Evaluate the drafted changes[edit]
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Note: the other group member is currently in China and does not have access to wikipedia editing (he can see it, but somehow isn't allow to edit anything).

Description

Pretty detailed description, but I think you can combine a couple sentences though.

Taxonomy

Nothing wrong with it, you might want to put it in the lead section since it's too short.

Distribution

Maybe I missed it, but I didn't find the part where it says it's the least widely distributed species of the genus, and removing "only" might make it sound better.

Habitat

First sentence is a repeated info from Distribution, shorten it.

DIet

Golden hamlets are predatory carnivores with a diet similar to other hamlets, consisting of small reef-dwelling fishes and invertebrates. Crustaceans, such as shrimp, crabs, and small fishes make up most of their diet.

[The cited article mentioned small fishes]

Reproduction

H. gummigutta displays no parental care; fertilization is external and takes place after eggs are released into the water, where they disperse and grow into planktonic larvae.

[And the article cited was talking about H. nigricans, not sure if they behave the same way.]

Sources and References

All the information are well cited and a lot of the times backed up by multiple sources.

Image and Media

I know it's very hard to find an image, but it would definitely make the article better.

Overall impressions

Overall content is pretty good.