User:Lins8719/Green Timbers Urban Forest/MuseumHours Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Lins8719


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Lins8719/Green_Timbers_Urban_Forest?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Hello,

Firstly I would like to bring up how the section 'Green Timbers Urban Forest' should become the introduction instead, as it describes the primary aspects of this article.

To maintain the article's relevance, I would go into researching the history of this location and how it came to be. It would be interesting and useful if you are able to find information on who the land belonged to beforehand i.e. 'situated on Sto:lo land'. I would also add some images to further illustrate what this park looks like. I assume a reader looking at information about parks on Wikipedia would appreciate imagery associated with the topic.

I notice there seems to be a focus on the biological aspects of the park, though I am not quite sure about the necessity of describing those things in list form, unless it has notoriety for its flora & fauna. If the vision for this article is for it to be a biological understanding of this park, I would take these steps:


 * 1) Have enough content for the page 'Green Timbers Urban Forest' to describe the relevance of this Park.
 * 2) Write a section about the relevance of its flora & fauna
 * 3) Create a new Wiki article titled something like 'List of flora & fauna of Green Timbers Urban Forest', as lists on Wikipedia are commonly given their own page depending on the amount of content in the lists.
 * 4) Link this new list article to the original page within the section describing the relevance of the flora & fauna.