User:Lins8719/Ola Volo/RebLAHIS Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) Lins8719


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Ola Volo


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Hi Lins,

By viewing your draft, seems like you are creating a new page for an artist Ola Volo. I can see there is brief introduction about the artist you are writing on. I found that you can add the image on the page, so the readers would know who Ola Volo is by looking at the photo. Also, I think you can expand a little bit more on what is Ola Volo's art practice, by adding images and supporting with sources and references to the content. To create I better structure for you article, in my perspective, I suggested that you can pin point few influential pieces from Volo's (one or two, or more), and writing more about those pieces, you can also add and quote those critiques from the pieces. So, the readers would have more understanding towards Volo's works, no matter in a good side or in a negative side. Looking forward to see you extending and create this new wiki page to Ola Volo.

Best,

Rebecca