User:Linus Robideau/Nordic Walking/EthanKoe Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Linus Robideau


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Linus%20Robideau/Nordic_Walking?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Nordic walking

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think that overall your draft is pretty good. I think that the content of your article is pretty good, the only issue I see is that there is a study talked about but it is not said what specific study this is. So maybe if you have the name of it the paragraph would be even better. I think your sources are all good and you don't have any statements that are not cited which is good. And I think it is good that you have a lot of links to other wikipedia articles. Overall, great job!