User:Lionashoji/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Sustainable Development Goal 4

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
Although this article was ranked as "Class C," our group discussed how important providing education for sustainable development and global citizenship and how gender equality will help increase that in society and the economy. We can integrate global citizenship education and foster that environment to include gender equalities as a subject but also have a resource for people to act upon what they learned. As the peace proposal says, helping to achieve gender equality will help with other factors such as the economy improving and the society getting closer together as women have an important role to contribute to other minorities.

Evaluate the article
The strengths are how this article hits many targets of this goal is listed, as well as graphs and data as a easy visual. I really liked how this article included the impact of covid-19 and the recentness of that. The article can improve with adding more details per section, as some section only has a couple paragraphs. The article is 85% complete and can have more added. Since SDG's are connected to each other the section for connecting the SDG 4 to other SDG's can be expanded as well. There has not been an engaged comment or evaluation based on the talk-section, but the sources are current.