User:Lipidmonolayer1/Pnictatetrahedranes/OneMustImagineAGradStudentHappy Peer Review

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Lipidmonolayer1
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:Lipidmonolayer1/Pnictatetrahedranes&redirect=no
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Pnictatetrahedranes

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A lot of care was taken into writing this article. Lots of computational work was done, and the produced images were visually appealing.

The lead does a good job summarizing the article and is not too long.

The history section gives a good overview of both synthetic and theoretical work.

If other pnictatetrahedranes other than phosphatetrahedrane were synthesized, the phosphatetrahedrane section is well-written enough to move to its own Wikipedia page, leaving this page as just an overview of all pnictatetrahedranes.

For the synthesis of tri-tert-butylmonophosphatetrahedrane, the second step mentions pyridine, but it's not shown in the reaction scheme. What does it do? Additionally, in the second paragraph, "To replace one of the trimethylsilyls groups," is trimethylsilyl supposed to have an s at the end?

In the Di-tert-butyldiphosphatetrahedrane section, you mentioned that Ni(CO)4 was the starting material, but the scheme shows Ni(CO)3(IPr).

The sources were up to date, and links to references are working. Great job including links to many other existing Wikipedia articles.

Impressive and comprehensive theoretical section.

I still don't totally understand the corset effect. Where do the HHB come from, and what does the network look like?