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Lake Mungo Remains

This page was first created on the 10th September 2005. For a first edit it is rather detailed and contains a good amount of information although it is not structured greatly, especially in comparison to the most recent edit. It's lacking a number of references for the amount of detail and information given and while still rather similar to it's newest incarnation, it is hard to measure the reliability due to the lack of sources. Had I created this page for the first time I would ensure a linear structure is followed (as it only has three rather unrelated headings) and produce more references to ensure the credibility of the page. The lake Mungo remains were uncovered in the 1970s so much of this information would have been available and easy to cite through academic sources; however, much of the content itself (not including structure and detail) is still good and just needs more work. It is quite visibly a good first draft.