User:Literacystudent/Reading/Jaimekatz926 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Literacystudent


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Literacystudent/Reading?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
It is clear a lot of research was put into this and your tone is both neutral and uses academic language. More needs to added to the body of the article as opposed to the heading, but what you have so far is great. I do have some questions about the words coming up as red underlined, which is spell-check code for a misspelling, if spellcheck doesn't know what it's talking about because of the scientific terms of if something can be changed. Also, there is a typo in the first sentence where it says "researcher" and probably should say "researchers". Your sources list is great and just needs to be moved down to the reference section.