User:Literally Legally Blonde/Penny J. White/Amulumudi Peer Review

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If there is one available I think you should include a picture of Penny White in the lead section so people right off the bat can put a face to who you're talking about

When talking about her work in the Houston v Lack case you add a claim about that case solidifying her reputation. Is there an article that states that directly? Otherwise I think you might have to take out the line from that section

I like that you provide explanations of the district White resides in and The Death Penalty, but they do seem out of place in the article/don't follow the natural flow of the story you're telling about her legal career. Really the main thing is that there is not necessary a good place to put it, so I think instead maybe put links to the first judicial district when you mention it and then in describing her views on the death penalty in Tenessee include that in your description of why it was relevant in her retention election rather than making it a whole new section altogether.

The section about her scholarship and professorship is really well organized and detailed!!

I don't know if there's any information available but I hope you're able to add more to the personal life section in the future

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Source 22: when I click on the link it says the page does not exist; it looks like that's from the original article so I am not sure if you intended on including it