User:Litheleo/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Social media and suicide
 * Has a good lead and the content is relevant however some of the content is not cited. Well balanced and the article is written okay but can use some work. the references aren't completed which is highlighted in the talk track.
 * Overall, this article is in need of facts not opinions.
 * https://blog.pcc.com/social-media-self-esteem-and-teen-suicide
 * https://abcnews.go.com/Health/mom-sues-social-media-giants-allegedly-driving-11/story?id=82652830
 * https://blog.pcc.com/social-media-self-esteem-and-teen-suicide
 * https://abcnews.go.com/Health/mom-sues-social-media-giants-allegedly-driving-11/story?id=82652830

Option 2

 * Postpartum blues
 * Has a good lead but can be more, content is relevant but there could be more. it is toned and balanced but more information can be added. The sources are within the last 6 years but more updated information can be added.
 * Overall i feel as though this article can have more information about the topic, it was very straight to the point without any in-depth research and explaining.
 * https://www.webmd.com/depression/postpartum-depression/postpartum-depression-baby-blues
 * https://health.clevelandclinic.org/baby-blues/
 * https://www.webmd.com/depression/postpartum-depression/postpartum-depression-baby-blues
 * https://health.clevelandclinic.org/baby-blues/

Option 3

 * Screen time
 * The lead was okay and got straight to the point but didn't hook me in. The article broke down the different types of effects screen time has on sleep and different topics like brain development, Behavioral impact, academic performance, and sleep which are important topics. It was toned and balanced and was somewhat neutral because it focused more on the bad effects screen time has on the brain. Some sources were up to date but some where a little older than 5 years. Overall, this is good article and to me it was persuasive in a good way.
 * https://healthmatters.nyp.org/what-does-too-much-screen-time-do-to-childrens-brains/
 * https://health.clevelandclinic.org/how-screen-time-can-slow-your-childs-development/
 * https://healthmatters.nyp.org/what-does-too-much-screen-time-do-to-childrens-brains/
 * https://health.clevelandclinic.org/how-screen-time-can-slow-your-childs-development/

Option 4

 * Music and aerobic exercise performance
 * Good lead. The article doesn't have any research or study facts in it that indicated music is good for you, the sources don't seem too accurate or up to date no one has edited the article yet. Overall, this article needs work. There should be more studies listed and facts to back up the fact that music helps your exercise performance levels and why this may be the case.
 * https://www.psychologytoday.com/us/blog/ulterior-motives/202006/the-benefits-listening-music-when-you-exercise
 * https://www.runnersworld.com/news/a28172648/upbeat-music-motivates-sprint-workouts/
 * https://www.medicalnewstoday.com/articles/320980
 * https://www.runnersworld.com/news/a28172648/upbeat-music-motivates-sprint-workouts/
 * https://www.medicalnewstoday.com/articles/320980

Option 5

 * Black Women's Health Imperative
 * The article starts off talking about reproductive rights of Black Americans but should start off with a stronger message of women of colors health overall and not pinpoint 1 specific topic. The content means well but it lacks so much information and studies. The article should have some information as to why Black Americans have such a high risk of all these diseases and get a little more in depth on that topic instead of using them as aim points. The article was well written but it just lacks studies on this topic, there are actually some good articles in the source page.
 * https://www.liebertpub.com/doi/10.1089/jwh.2020.8868
 * https://magazine.jhsph.edu/2020/black-womens-biggest-health-issue-system
 * https://www.medicalnewstoday.com/articles/we-must-educate-doctors-about-black-womens-experience-says-expert#10
 * http://blackrj.org/wp-content/uploads/2015/10/BlackWomen-andReproductiveHealthFS.pdf
 * https://www.nytimes.com/2021/07/12/well/mind/black-women-health-statistics.html
 * https://www.hopkinsmedicine.org/health/wellness-and-prevention/mental-health-among-african-american-women
 * https://www.liebertpub.com/doi/10.1089/heq.2017.0045
 * https://www.aaihs.org/black-womens-reproductive-health-and-legacies-of-distrust/
 * https://journals.lww.com/greenjournal/fulltext/2022/03000/racism_and_the_reproductive_health_experiences_of.8.aspx
 * https://time.com/5109797/black-women-dying-reproductive-health/
 * https://www.hsph.harvard.edu/women-and-health-initiative/publications/blogs-and-event-summaries/trust-black-women-reproductive-justice-in-the-united-states/
 * https://www.healthaffairs.org/doi/10.1377/hlthaff.2021.01422
 * https://www.hsph.harvard.edu/women-and-health-initiative/publications/blogs-and-event-summaries/trust-black-women-reproductive-justice-in-the-united-states/
 * https://www.healthaffairs.org/doi/10.1377/hlthaff.2021.01422