User:Lithopslover/Arctic Hare/Mkarasik Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Lithopslover


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Lithopslover/Arctic Hare
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Arctic Hare

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Guiding questions:


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete?
 * The edited article gives a strong overview of Arctic hare physiology and its adaptive benefits, as well as its diet and reproduction
 * What are the strengths of the content added?
 * Everything in the article makes sense and there are well-developed explanations with logical and easy to follow transitions between ideas
 * All of the information seems relevant and descriptions are concise yet detailed
 * I like the focus on how the physiology allows Arctic hares to live in the cold environment
 * All links work and sources look really good
 * How can the content added be improved?
 * The first sentence could be edited a bit to be more neutral and informative. Maybe talk about how the features are adaptive or different from other lagomorphs rather than interesting
 * Could use a few more citations, especially for the eating meat sentence and the lifespan paragraph. I think non-academic but still reliable sources could be useful for those
 * Double check for some small grammatical mistakes and confusing phrasing. Also, "Arctic hare" is misspelled once in the second paragraph
 * Some questions to possibly answer in the article:
 * How is a low metabolic rate adaptive to a cold habitat?
 * How does eating snow to get water impact the hares? Does this affect physiology and do they get any significant amount from food? (these questions aren't super pressing, maybe just add another sentence if there's an interesting answer)

Overall, this is a very informative article with well-researched explanations of Arctic hare physiology, feeding, and reproduction! Great job!