User:Litstudent/Language transfer/LehmanGirlMD Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Litstudent


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Litstudent/Language_transfer?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Language transfer
 * Language transfer

Evaluate the drafted changes
-I would think through the word choices and read for grammatical errors

-The article definitely has a neutral tone

-The topic is so rick it would be nice to add some more details or elaborate on the topic of transfer literacy a bit more