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Evaluation of a Wikipedia Article
The Wikipedia article that I am evaluating is the biography of Brené Brown.

Minor editing of the lead from the above mentioned article.

Original:

Having spent her career studying the concepts of courage, vulnerability, shame, and empathy and having authored seven books including five New York Times best-sellers, Brown hosts the Unlocking Us podcast, and her TED talk, "The Power of Vulnerability", has been widely viewed.

Edit:

Having spent her career studying the concepts of courage, vulnerability, shame and empathy, Brown has authored seven books including five New York Times best-sellers. She hosts the Unlocking Us podcast, and her TED talk, "The Power of Vulnerability", has been widely viewed.

- comma removed between shame and empathy

- finished the first sentence after mentioning her books

- started a new sentence to highlight her talks

- added an external link for "The Power of Vulnerability"